Later in the STEPS process, you will share the draft of your essay with peers and
with your instructor. They will provide helpful feedback about the effectiveness of your
thesis statement, and you will likely fine-tune it during the Revising step. Your final
thesis may be quite different than your initial draft. Below are typical examples of how
your thesis statement may evolve during the STEPS process.
with your instructor. They will provide helpful feedback about the effectiveness of your
thesis statement, and you will likely fine-tune it during the Revising step. Your final
thesis may be quite different than your initial draft. Below are typical examples of how
your thesis statement may evolve during the STEPS process.
This is the evolution of Carli's thesis
This is the evolution of Mary's Thesis
This is the evolution of Cassie's thesis
This is the evolution of Leanna's thesis
This is the evolution of Holly's thesis